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Blizzard/Officer Down (Glass Ball) revised once again :)

LOL! As you can see, I just love to revise this one Blizzard/Officer Downsnow doesn't fall each flake charges sidewaysor slants to blindly punch the ground and he is blizzard born as they take his...

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Re: Blizzard/Officer Down (Glass Ball) revised once again :)

rosered,There is much poignancy in what you offer the reader. Violence in the streets. I like the way you offer up a scene from different angles, and the snow paints red against my mindset. sarah

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sounds like heavy weather.people who live in glass houses...

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Re: Blizzard/Officer Down (Glass Ball) revised once again :)

Fascinating held my attention Graphically descriptive of todays world

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Re: Blizzard/Officer Down (Glass Ball) revised once again :)

thanks so much for reading and commenting, owl, willow and poet I guess it must be fun (err... therapeutic) for me to keep revising this one.I knew the officer and the child, so am probably just...

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Re: Blizzard/Officer Down (Glass Ball) revised once again :)

mar,I'm always revising. I have poems from twenty + years ago I still work on. Yours is really developing but I absolutely love this: his fifty star blue eyes.sarah

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thanks, owl

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Re: Blizzard/Officer Down (Glass Ball) revised once again :)

A sad story but beautifully writen.

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Re: Blizzard/Officer Down (Glass Ball) revised once again :)

thanks for reading, lolilale

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